Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Haiku #48

Countless drops of red
on my quivering fingers.
Cracked ketchup bottle.


Anthony Clarke said...

Metal hands of fire
are just so difficult to
use, correct, m'lud?

I know its bloody murder of english grammar, but it was my third try. Cut me some slack?

MomentEye said...

Even condiments
Have reason to fear you, Lord.
Still mustard is best.


Nyaz said...

That is awesome Lord
You can tell I was totally
Not expecting that

Did I do that right? I suck at figuring out syllables and stuff.

Sargeras said...

@ AC:
Edward Scissorhands
alone can truly fathom
my unwieldy plight.

@ MomentEye:
Mustard is like corn:
Yellow, and a colonel too.
(See what I did there?)

@ Nyaz:
Your second line has
eight syllables, but some would
argue that's okay. ;-)

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